yu guangzhong 2

 风铃 windbell

我的心是七层塔檐上悬挂的风铃 my heart is like hang the on towers's windbell

叮铃叮铃铃 1.ding li  ding li li

此起彼落，敲叩着一个人的名字 constant sway,like knocking someone's name

----你的塔上也感到微震吗？Do you feel that?

这是寂静的脉搏，日夜不停 this is silent pulse

你听见了吗，叮铃叮铃铃？Did you hear that?

这恼人的音调禁不胜禁 this noise just can not stop 

除非叫所有的风都改道 unless you let the wing go away for the towers

铃都摘掉，塔都推到 remove all the bells,push down all the towers

只因我的心是高高低低的风铃 just because my heart is the windbell

叮铃叮铃铃 ding li ding li li

此起彼落 constant sway

敲叩着一个人的名字 knocking someone's name.

1.ding li ding li li --is the onomatopoeic words from the windbell.

opinion

《风铃》是余光中的一首抒情诗，诗人以风铃为载体，表达出一个游子对故人的无限牵挂和对祖国母亲刻骨铭心的思念。
　　“七层塔檐上悬挂的风铃”，它象征着诗人的心。诗人的心就像风铃，日夜不停地“叮咛叮咛咛”。在碰撞中产生共鸣
　　《风铃》的语言质朴、平实，很口语化，通俗易懂。其句式长短相间，参差错落，吟诵起来，富有节奏。诗间反复出现拟声词“叮咛叮咛咛”和动词“敲叩”，创造出一种声的意象，具有较强的音律美，给人以听觉上的享受。
　　细品《风铃》，不难发现诗中隐含着一种理性的情感美。诗歌以诗人的情感脉络为线索，表达的感情时起时伏开始，表达了自己的思念之情从未变化，感情凝重而深沉.　　

opinion

<<windbell >>is yu guangzhong(the poet's name)a express feelings pome.the poet used the windbell to express to cared his family and missed his country.  "my heart is like hang on the towers windbell."this sentwnce was represent the poet heart. poet's heart just liked the windbell,always has struck aresponsive chord in the herat of it is readers.   the synatax of this poem was very simple,and have the ritma the poet use the onomatopoeic words, let this pome more lively.

I found this poem took 10 minutes

I translated this poem used a one and a half hours

i writed the opinion used 4hours.

  乡愁 Homesick      
      余光中
小时候，乡愁是一枚小小的邮票 When I was young, homesick is a little stamp
我在这头， 母亲在那头I am here ,momther was there

长大后，乡愁是一枚小小的船票When I grow up, homesick is a little ship ticket
我在这头，新娘在那头I am here , my wife was there

后来啊，乡愁是一方小小的坟墓Afterwards, homesick is a little grave
我在外头，母亲在里头I am on the outside, momther was in there

而现在，乡愁是一弯浅浅的海峡But right now, homesick is a straight
我在这头，大陆在那头I am here , my homeland was there

opinion

1940年抗戰時期余光中入四川江北悅來場教會學校南京青年會中學，借用民宅當校舍，而其父余超英的工作單位及父母的住所，就在十里外的朱氏祠堂裏。余光中寄宿在學校，每隔一兩周才回家一次，所以〈鄉愁〉的開頭就從此時與母親通信的郵票為象徵，代表著幼時思念母親的鄉愁。小時候上寄宿學校，要與媽媽通信﹔婚後赴美讀書，坐輪船返台﹔後來母親去世，永失母愛。詩的前三句思念的都是女性，到最後一句我想到祖國大陸這樣“大母親”，於是意境和思路便豁然開朗，就有了“鄉愁是一灣淺淺的海峽”一句。」

When the post was a young boy and going to highschool,he can't go home everyday.Separated by only go home once a week. So this poem's start is about the stamp,because he always use a stamp to contact his mom.  And when the post get married,he have to leave his wife and go to America to study,so the poem's cecond part is about the ship ticket. Afterwords,post'momther was died ,he lost his mom forever,so he's poem the thith part is writeing about the grave.This poem the first three part is all about the woman, but the last partis about the homeland. Why? Because the post think the homeland just like his mom.China is everybody's momther.

I read this poem use 5min
translate use 30 min
my opinion use about 2 hours.
total is 2 hours and 30min.

余光中，祖籍福建永春，1928年10月21日生于江苏南京，1948年随父母迁香港， 1953年，与一些知名作家共创“蓝星”诗社。后赴美进修，获爱荷华大学艺术硕士学位。返台后任师大、政大、台大及香港中文大学教授，现任台湾中山大学文学院院长。
Yu guangzhong,from NanJing City, China.1948 live in HongKong whit him parents.1953 year,he make a "Lang- Xing"poetry society whit some famous poets.and than go to the America learning,got University Of Iowa master.

Chinese Modern poet--yu guangzhong

舟子的悲歌   SAD SHIP 

余光中   yu guang zhong 

 

一张破老的白帆,An old white sail

漏去了清风一半,Breeze to sneak away

却引来海鸥两三,However, attracted two or three seagulls
荒寂的海上谁作伴，In a lonely sea,no one near by me
啊，没有伴，没有伴，Oh, no friend,and nobod
y除了黄昏一片云，Except the twilight
除了午夜一颗星，Except the Midnight  stars
除了心头一个影，Except a Shadow in my heart
还有一卷惠特曼。Only a ①walt whitman's book

我心里有一首歌，Has a song in my heart

好久好久都不曾唱过，Long time i didn't sing it
今晚我敞开胸怀舱里卧，But tonight,I lay on the cabin and open my mind
不怕那海鸥偷笑我，I don't care seagulls will laughing me
它那歌喉也差不多。Cause their voice same like me
我唱起歌来大海你来和，I singing a song and the sea help me accompany
男低音是浪和波，Waves are the bass
男高音是我。I am a treble


昨夜，Lastnight
月光在海上铺一条金路，Moonlight  make a gold  lane, on the sea
渡我的梦回到大陆，Help my dream come back to my homeland
在那淡淡的月光下，In the faint moonlight
我梦见脸色更淡的老母，I dreamed my emaciated mother
我发狂地跑上去，I ran to her
一颗童心在腔里欢舞，A childlike innocence dancing in my heart
啊，oh
何处是老母，何处是老母，Where is my mon ? Where is my mom?

荒烟衰草丛里， In a  desolate,dark and dirty place
有坟茔无数……There are many graves······

①沃尔特•惠特曼（Walt Whitman，May 31,1810－March 26,1892），生于纽约，他是美国著名诗人、人文主义者，他创造了诗歌的自由体（Free Verse），其代表作品是诗集《草叶集》。

He born in New York,and he was a famous American poet and Humanism.He create a system poetry call Free Verse.

opinion
此诗写于1951年。诗人书写了他离开祖国大陆的苍凉心境。他通过漏风的帆，黄昏的一片云，午夜的一颗星和心头的一个影，强烈地写出了离开祖国大陆的游子的孤独、寂寞和一种漂泊无根的心绪和情感。游子日思暮想，于是归乡之梦萦绕，“昨夜，/月光在还上铺一条金路，/渡我的梦回到大陆”，游子在梦中终于见到了老母，但当他发狂般扑过去时，幻想却破灭了，老母早已埋在荒野草丛中。诗作真实地展示了一个流亡者凄凉的、绝望的心态。

This poem is from 1951 years,poet writerd down the feeling when he leaved the homeland.He use the old sail,twilight,midnight stars and a shadow to express his loneliness and the feeling of the wander aimlessly in a strange land.When the poet saw him momther and ran to her at the dream,the dream was broken.....His monther alrealdy died. This poem reveal a real funereal atmosphere.

I found this poem use10min
and i translating use 1hours
obout my opinion took my 1hours

Yue Fei's story

那是在一个冬天的下午，外面吹着寒风，突然在一个农居的小房子里传出一阵又一阵婴儿的哭声，岳飞就在这天下午出生了。岳飞在妈妈怀里不停地哭着，小脸涨得通红，岳飞的爸爸在旁边来回走着不停地拍着脑门，哎，该给这孩子取个什么名字呢？正好这时候，小房的上面正好有一只大鸟嘴里哇哇叫着飞了过去，岳飞的爸爸脸上露出了微笑：对，就把这孩子叫做岳飞吧。希望他以后能象大鸟一样展翅高飞。

在岳飞出生只有二十八天的时候，这天早上岳飞爸爸要到镇上去办事，突然黄河发了好大好大的洪水，那洪水就象一个张着大嘴的魔鬼，从很远很远的地方呼啸而来，吞没了一个又一个村庄。当洪水来到岳飞的家门口时，岳飞的妈妈急中生智，抱着岳飞跳进了一个大大的水缸，就这样，洪水就载着这只水缶不停地漂啊漂，周围已经不见了村庄，全是黄黄的洪水。

终于，几天过去了，大水也退去了，岳飞和妈妈也漂到了一个小镇上。岳飞和妈妈便无家可归了，于是他们就在这个小镇上安家落户了。

岳飞小时候家里非常贫穷，所以他很早就跟随妈妈到田里劳动，夏天的太阳火辣辣地照在小岳飞的身上，可是小岳习却一点都不怕，因为他是一个非常坚强的孩子。岳飞还非常喜欢看书，喜欢学习。他常常看书到深夜。岳飞从书中知道了很多的知识，比如说要尊老爱幼，要懂礼貌。他还非常喜爱看打仗的书，他想长大以后做一个大将军，率领一支军队去保家卫国，去帮助国家不受到别人欺负。

On a cold winter afternoon,in a farmer's house, heard the crying of babies, this was Yue Fei.
When his father saw a bird Outside.He decision the baby name call Yue Fei.Because he want to him son can like the bird,free and fly.When Yue Fei just 28 days of birth,he farther go outside to woke.But the Yellow River suddenly have flood.The  flood was very big and terrible.When the foold was coming,Yue Fei's mom find a big tub and sat down.Folloed the river plume,they plume to a village.Yue Fei very poor,so when he small,he need to go to the fame to help him mom.He was a staunch boy,he love to help anyother people and love to learn.He want to be a soldier to guard country.

I write down this story use 30 min

and I translate this story use about 40 min

Yue Fei ---2

          小重山 

             岳飞 

昨夜寒蛩不住鸣。惊回千里梦，已三更。起来独自绕阶行。人悄悄，帘外月胧明。 白首为功名。旧山松竹老，阻归程。欲将心事付瑶琴。知音少，弦断有谁听？

昨晚受寒的秋蝉不断哀鸣，惊醒我回千里之外（故乡）的梦，已经三更了，我寂静无语，帘外面月亮朦胧微明。 为了追求功名利禄头发已白，家乡的松竹也长大了，阻断了我回家的路。想要将心事寄托在瑶琴

Last night have cicadas wail, because they feel cold.Awakened my homeland dream.
Have been 3 o'clock,out the window,the moon is very beautiful.I worked very hard all my life for my future,my hair has turned white,my homeland's pine may grown up,Blocking my  home way.I just can use Musical Instruments to express my feeling.

opinion
岳飞的《满江红》词，壮志不已，是脍灸人口的爱国佳作。这首《小重山》词，改用艺术手法表达他抗金报国的壮志雄怀。岳飞抗金的伟业，不但受到赵构、秦桧君臣的迫害，而同时其他的将领如张俊、杨沂中、刘光世等，亦各不信任互相拆台，故岳飞有知音难遇之叹。《小重山》词抒写了这种感慨。此词上半阕写出忧深思远之情，与阮籍《咏怀》诗第一首“夜中不能寐，起坐弹鸣琴”意境相似。下半阕“白首”二句，表面低沉消极，但实际上正是壮志难酬的孤愤。“欲将”三句，用比兴手法点出“知音”难遇的凄凉的情怀，甚为悲伤忧郁。

This pome the way is different to last one.Last one is very strong,very bold.But this pome very soft.This pome was talking about the poet very have prospects
, but he lost him family.He was very miss him himeland.


i read this pome use 10 min
i english translationuse about 40 min
the opinion use 50 min

about the poet

About the poet
岳飞（1103－1142）字鹏举，汉族。北宋相州汤阴县永和乡孝悌里（今河南省安阳市汤阴县菜园镇程岗村）人。中国历史上著名战略家、军事家、民族英雄、抗金名将。岳飞在军事方面的才能则被誉为宋、辽、金、西夏时期最为杰出的军事统帅、连结河朔之谋的缔造者。

yue fe（A.D1103—1142）,chinese.he is a  very famous military strategists , national hero and General
in Chinese history.


Why ?
 Why I choose Yue Fei to do this work?Becouse the recent have earthquake in Japan,their family was broke,their lost the homeland.I can understand their feelings.Because beforn our country have a same thing.That was very sad!!So I want the Japanese can learning as Yue Fei.Learn his fortitude and tenacious.
i hope they can leave the suffering early and smile.

i write down this work use 30 min