yu guangzhong 2

 风铃 windbell

我的心是七层塔檐上悬挂的风铃 my heart is like hang the on towers's windbell

叮铃叮铃铃 1.ding li  ding li li

此起彼落，敲叩着一个人的名字 constant sway,like knocking someone's name

----你的塔上也感到微震吗？Do you feel that?

这是寂静的脉搏，日夜不停 this is silent pulse

你听见了吗，叮铃叮铃铃？Did you hear that?

这恼人的音调禁不胜禁 this noise just can not stop 

除非叫所有的风都改道 unless you let the wing go away for the towers

铃都摘掉，塔都推到 remove all the bells,push down all the towers

只因我的心是高高低低的风铃 just because my heart is the windbell

叮铃叮铃铃 ding li ding li li

此起彼落 constant sway

敲叩着一个人的名字 knocking someone's name.

1.ding li ding li li --is the onomatopoeic words from the windbell.

opinion

《风铃》是余光中的一首抒情诗，诗人以风铃为载体，表达出一个游子对故人的无限牵挂和对祖国母亲刻骨铭心的思念。
　　“七层塔檐上悬挂的风铃”，它象征着诗人的心。诗人的心就像风铃，日夜不停地“叮咛叮咛咛”。在碰撞中产生共鸣
　　《风铃》的语言质朴、平实，很口语化，通俗易懂。其句式长短相间，参差错落，吟诵起来，富有节奏。诗间反复出现拟声词“叮咛叮咛咛”和动词“敲叩”，创造出一种声的意象，具有较强的音律美，给人以听觉上的享受。
　　细品《风铃》，不难发现诗中隐含着一种理性的情感美。诗歌以诗人的情感脉络为线索，表达的感情时起时伏开始，表达了自己的思念之情从未变化，感情凝重而深沉.　　

opinion

<<windbell >>is yu guangzhong(the poet's name)a express feelings pome.the poet used the windbell to express to cared his family and missed his country.  "my heart is like hang on the towers windbell."this sentwnce was represent the poet heart. poet's heart just liked the windbell,always has struck aresponsive chord in the herat of it is readers.   the synatax of this poem was very simple,and have the ritma the poet use the onomatopoeic words, let this pome more lively.

I found this poem took 10 minutes

I translated this poem used a one and a half hours

i writed the opinion used 4hours.

  乡愁 Homesick      
      余光中
小时候，乡愁是一枚小小的邮票 When I was young, homesick is a little stamp
我在这头， 母亲在那头I am here ,momther was there

长大后，乡愁是一枚小小的船票When I grow up, homesick is a little ship ticket
我在这头，新娘在那头I am here , my wife was there

后来啊，乡愁是一方小小的坟墓Afterwards, homesick is a little grave
我在外头，母亲在里头I am on the outside, momther was in there

而现在，乡愁是一弯浅浅的海峡But right now, homesick is a straight
我在这头，大陆在那头I am here , my homeland was there

opinion

1940年抗戰時期余光中入四川江北悅來場教會學校南京青年會中學，借用民宅當校舍，而其父余超英的工作單位及父母的住所，就在十里外的朱氏祠堂裏。余光中寄宿在學校，每隔一兩周才回家一次，所以〈鄉愁〉的開頭就從此時與母親通信的郵票為象徵，代表著幼時思念母親的鄉愁。小時候上寄宿學校，要與媽媽通信﹔婚後赴美讀書，坐輪船返台﹔後來母親去世，永失母愛。詩的前三句思念的都是女性，到最後一句我想到祖國大陸這樣“大母親”，於是意境和思路便豁然開朗，就有了“鄉愁是一灣淺淺的海峽”一句。」

When the post was a young boy and going to highschool,he can't go home everyday.Separated by only go home once a week. So this poem's start is about the stamp,because he always use a stamp to contact his mom.  And when the post get married,he have to leave his wife and go to America to study,so the poem's cecond part is about the ship ticket. Afterwords,post'momther was died ,he lost his mom forever,so he's poem the thith part is writeing about the grave.This poem the first three part is all about the woman, but the last partis about the homeland. Why? Because the post think the homeland just like his mom.China is everybody's momther.

I read this poem use 5min
translate use 30 min
my opinion use about 2 hours.
total is 2 hours and 30min.